專四改革

專四新題型寫作

自2016年起，專四考試寫作部分改革，要求根據所給的題目、

圖表或閱讀材料等，寫一篇200詞左右的作文。出現的新題型命題+

材料作文對考生的閱讀理解及歸納能力提出了更高的要求。考生可以

采取“簡短概述材料—評論—總結”的寫作模式。值得注意的是，在

寫作過程中，概述材料和進行評論缺一不可，否則將可能被扣分。

例題1

PARTVIWRITING

Readcarefullythefollowingexcerptandthenwrite

yourresponinNOLESSTHAN200WORDS,inwhich

youshould:

1)Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,and

then

2)Commentonwhetherstudentslearnmorefrom

classthanfromotherresources

Youcansupportyourlfwithinformationfromthe

excerpt.

Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,content

sufficiency,e

tofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossof

marks.

Dostudentslearnmorefromclassthanfromother

resources?

WiththeadventoftheInternetandother

telecommunicationstechnologies,thereisavastly

growingwealthofresourcesavailablefromanimmen

tshavetheabilityto

absorbinformationinaquickerandmoreefficientway

whenrearchingontheirownthroughreading

ult,

somepeoplearguethatstudentsnowlearnmorefrom

otherresourcesthanfromclass.

Conductingrearchwithonlinematerialsisan

activeprocess,whichallowsyoungsterstofocusin

greaterdetailratherthanpassivelylisteningtoalecture

inalargeclassroom.

TheInternetandTVarealsoeasilyaccessible

platformsforstudentsintheremoteplaceswhere

teachingresourcesarenotasabundantasthoinmore

developedregions.

However,teachershavethecapabilityofexplaining

theknowledgeinadeeperwayandnotonlyprovide

theoreticalexplanationbutalsopracticalexperience

veaccumulatedalargebodyof

intelligencethatisprofoundlymoreprecithanother

rsnotonlyfunctionasinitiatorswho

impartknowledgebutalsorveassupervisorsor

ventionalroleofinstructors,inthis

dayandage,havolvedtobecomeevaluatorsand

facilitators,guidingstudentsintheiracademicand

personalefforts.

范文1

Intheinformationage,thetraditionalstudent-teacher

relationshiphasbeenaffecteddeeplyandpeoplebeginto

doubtwhetherstudentscanlearnmorefromclassthan

fromotherresources.（介紹背景）Accordingtothe

conventionalview,teachersarestilltheprimarysource

fromwhichstudentsobtainprofessionalknowledge,

timelyclassinteraction,andeffectivesupervisionfrom

teachers.（總結第一種觀點）Onthecontrary,nowadays,

manypeoplebelievethatstudentscanlearnmorefrom

otherresourcessuchasInternetandTVsincetheyare

moreaccessibleandengagestudentsmoreactivelyin

rearch.（總結第二種觀點）

Forme,Iaminfavorofthefirstview.（表明立場）

Teachersplayanirreplaceableroleineducation,whether

it’sinthepastoratprent,sincetheynotonlyimpart

knowledge,butalsoeducatepeople.（總論據）Forone

thing,whatstudentslearnfromtheirclassismore

precithanfromotherresourceswhichprovidean

enormousamountofdataneededtobesiftedthroughto

determinewhichinformationisaccurate.（理由一）For

another,teachersinschoolputtheshapingof

personalityinaplaceasimportantastheteachingof

knowledge,whichishardforstudentstoobtainfrom

otherresource.（理由二）

Inconclusion,thedevelopmentofcutting-edge

technologyexertsabigimpactonmoderneducation.

However,itcannevereliminatetheneedforhigh-quality

professionalsinclassroom.（重申論點）(213words)

例題2

PARTVIWRITING

Readcarefullythefollowingexcerptandthenwrite

yourresponinNOLESSTHAN200WORDS,inwhich

youshould:

1）Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthen

2）Commentonwhetherpeopleshouldchootobecome

indoorsy

Youcansupportyourlfwithinformationfromthe

excerpt.

Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,content

sufficiency,e

tofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossof

marks.

Shouldpeoplechootobecomeindoorsyinmodern

world?

Inmoderntimeswhenwecanbuyeverythingwe

needontheInternet,andcommunicateandevenwork

throughtheInternet,becomingindoorsymenorwomen

ast,ifyou

wanttobuysomething,youneedtogooutofyourhou,

gotothestore,andspendanhourortwochoosingthe

youcanjustsitin

frontofacomputerandclickyourmou,andthe

ndoorsycansave

peoplealotoftime.

Beingindoorsycanallowpeopletothinkandwork

mple,writerscanbe

quitecreativewhentheyarealoneathomewithoutbeing

interrupted.

Somesociologistswarnthattheindoorsylifestyle

peoplestayathomeforalongtime,theywillhavelittle

notknowhow

tohaveface-to-facecommunicationwithothers,andthey

maybecomeshy,uncomfortable,orlf-centeredwhen

indoorsylifestylewillhaveabadeffectontheirnormal

interpersonalrelationshipandtheirnormalwork.

Indoorsymenorwomenspendmostoftheirtime

sittinginfrontofacomputer,andtheyldomattend

ngthecomputerscreenfora

,many

indoorsypeopledonotliketoattendsportsactivities,

andinthelongrun,theirhealthwillgetwor.

范文2

審題思路

本題討論“宅”生活是否可取。在具體行文方面，考生應首先簡

要概述正方觀點：“宅”是現代的一種新型生活方式。然后概述反方

觀點：“宅”有種種弊端。接下來給出自己的觀點：現代科技是把雙

刃劍，我們要把握好，適當利用可以使我們的生活更便利，但過度依

賴則會對身體有害。最后總結全文，重申觀點。

ShouldWeEmbraceIndoorsyLifestyle?

Withtheglobalizationofmoderntechnology,

especiallytheworld-wideaccesstoInternetrvice,

people’slifestylehasbeengreatlyinfluenced.(介紹背景)

ldthatindoorsy

rast,tho

againsttheideaclaimthatkeepanindoorsylifestylewill

doharmtopeoplebothpsychologicallyandphysically.

（總結材料）

AsfarasIamconcerned,moderntechnologyisa

double-edgedsword.（點明觀點）Ifweconsideritasa

ufultooltoimproveourlife,itwillcertainlybring

eassistanceof

theInternet,onecansavehistimethroughworking,

shopping,orcommunicatingwithothersathome.（正方

理由一）Also,solitudeisn’talwayqualtoloneliness.

Freefromoutsideinterruption,onecanbecreativeand

keephismindsharp.（正方理由二）Ontheotherhand,

toomuchrelianceonorindulgenceintheInternetwill

certainlyhaveanimpactonournormallifeandwork.

Forinstance,indulginginsocialnetworkonlinemay

corrodepeoples’ecific,theymay

feellostwhentalkingwithpeopleface-to-face,which

mayaffecttheirnormalrelationshipwithfamily

membersandfriends.（反方理由一）What’swor,

sittinginfrontofacomputeralldaylongmeanslittle

outdooractivities,whichmaydamageone’shealth.（反方

理由二）

Inconclusion,whileenjoyingallthebenefitsthe

virtualworldhasbroughttous,indoorsypeopleshould

alsostepoutoftheirhomeandengagethemlvesinthe

realworld.（總結上一段）(234words)