開心寫作坊：我最喜歡的科目
在你所學的科目里，你最喜歡的科目是什么？請以 “My favorite subject” 為題，寫一篇英語作文。詞數：60 ~100。
技巧點撥
這篇文章要求學生介紹自己最喜歡的科目，并簡要介紹該科目，同時說明自己喜歡這一科目的原因，還要寫出今后的學習計劃。文章主題貼近校園生活，讓學生既有話題可寫，又有內容想表達。建議學生在寫作時充分結合自身的學習經歷，簡明扼要、有理有據地說明自己喜歡這一科目的理由，并有條理的列舉自己的學習計劃。
寫作提綱
時態：一般現在時，一般將來時
人稱：第一人稱
內容：
1、介紹你最喜歡的科目是什么，以及你對該科目的了解；
2、寫出你喜歡這一科目的原因；
3、談談你對該科目今后的學習計劃。
重點詞組： 我最喜歡的科目 my favorite subject 喜歡的 favorite
努力學習 work hard 有趣且實用 interesting and uful
在未來 in the future
重點句型: … is my favorite subject. It is … for ... to do sth. I like ... becau ... I am interested in ... I will ...
過渡銜接
在介紹喜歡這一科目的理由時，可以使用 becau, becau of, in addition 等詞或詞組銜接上下文，使文章的條理更加清晰，內容更有說服力。
一類文
My favorite subject
Do you know what my favorite subject is? The answer is English.
As everyone knows, English is the most widely ud language in the world. So it’s important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world. After learning English, we can read more foreign books. This helps us to gain more knowledge. It can also broaden our horizons.
In order to improve my English skills, I will read English newspapers and listen to the radio in English as much as possible. I also bought lots of classic English books. I’ll read them whenever I have time.
People say “to have another language is to posss a cond soul.” So let’s learn English well.
【點評】首先，作者開門見山地介紹了自己喜歡的科目是英語，并接著道出了學習英語的重要性和學習英語可以拓寬眼界的好處。As everyone knows；It is important for sb to ... 等句型和 in order to；as much as possible；broaden one’s horizons；gain knowledge 等表達的使用為文章增色不少。最后以一句引人深思的名言結尾，畫龍點睛。
二類文
My favorite subject
Do you like math? I like it very much. There are many subjects in my school. They are all very important, but I think that math is more interesting than any other subject.
Learning formulas (公式) is interesting. There are many formulas in math for us to u. When you solve math problems, the formulas are very uful. They are so simple, yet they can work out difficult problems. You will feel very proud and fulfilled (滿足的) when you solve difficult math problems. In addition, you can tell your classmates happily, “I did it!” That is really cool.
I want to get better at math in the future. I will make more efforts to study
the subject. I will listen to my teachers more carefully in class. To be honest,
Learning math is not easy at all, so I will always keep it up. I believe that I can do it well!
【點評】文章通過問句引出作者最喜歡的科目。第二段，作者道出自己喜歡學習數學公式，并配合細節描寫，作者解決難題后的興奮與成就感仿佛躍然紙上。在最后一段中，作者道出自己的學習計劃，并表示為了學好這一科目必須加倍努力。美中不足的是，作者在內容表達上不夠精練，文章顯得有點啰嗦。在語言上，作者能夠準確的把握時態語態，并恰當地運用 more than, make effort to do sth, not at all, keep up 等表達，增強了文章的可讀性。
三類文
My favorite subject
There are plenty of subjects in my school. Among the subjects, I like English best. Let me tell you why.
I think everyone should know at least two languages. Language is a tool for communication. English is important and uful. So all of us should study English well. In addition, I think it is interesting and relaxing to study English. For the reasons, I like English best.
This year, I will study English harder. I plan to read more English books so I can learn more words and expressions, as well as understand Western culture. I will put my plan into practice. Where there is a will, there is a way. I think I can gain a lot through hard work.
