英文滿分作文:互聯(lián)網(wǎng)替代線下的利弊

2024年1月4日發(fā)(作者：爸爸的手)

英文滿分作文：互聯(lián)網(wǎng)替代線下的利弊

作文題目：

People today can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet. They

don't need to do the face to face. Is it a positive or negative development？

如今人們可以通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物、辦公及與他人溝通，他們不需要面對(duì)面做這些事情。這是一個(gè)積極還是消極發(fā)展？

思路解析

這是一道利弊類大作文，討論的是人們?cè)诨ヂ?lián)網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物、辦公和交流的利弊。利弊類的討論需要明確體現(xiàn)利大于弊、弊大于利或者利弊均等。這道題目看起來不難，但在審題時(shí)需要注意，題目給出了三個(gè)限定范圍：shop、work 和 communicate，因此在具體分析時(shí)三個(gè)方面都需要提及，否則回應(yīng)不全面分?jǐn)?shù)會(huì)低。

首先來看好處，主要有兩方面。

一是幫助人們節(jié)省了通勤時(shí)間。無論是去商場(chǎng)購(gòu)物、去辦公室工作還是和別人見面溝通，都需要花費(fèi)一定時(shí)間在路程上，如果遭遇擁擠的交通情況，體驗(yàn)感也會(huì)不佳。但是通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)完成這些事情的話，完全可以節(jié)約出這部分時(shí)間用來做別的事情。

二是人們通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)來完成這些事，可以不受到時(shí)間和空間的限制。大多數(shù)商場(chǎng)在晚上10點(diǎn)后就不再營(yíng)業(yè)，但是人們通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)即使在凌晨依然可以下單購(gòu)買想要的東西。如果能夠通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)完成工作，意味著人們可以選擇在家里或者一個(gè)讓自己更舒適的環(huán)境進(jìn)行工作，甚至在完成任務(wù)的前提下可以選擇自己喜歡的時(shí)間段辦公，而不是非得穿著得體在辦公室才行。對(duì)于那些分居異地的家人和朋友，可

能好幾個(gè)月甚至一兩年才能線下相聚，但是通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)每天都有機(jī)會(huì)文字、語音甚至視頻的方式進(jìn)行交流、維系感情。

然后來看各自場(chǎng)景下的壞處。

對(duì)于購(gòu)物來說，網(wǎng)購(gòu)時(shí)無法像線下親眼看到或是直接試用實(shí)際的產(chǎn)品，文字、圖片和視頻都可能誤導(dǎo)甚至欺騙消費(fèi)者，進(jìn)而導(dǎo)致消費(fèi)者買到與預(yù)期不符的東西。

通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)工作可能會(huì)遇到在辦公室沒有的各種干擾，比如家中小孩子的吵鬧，或是當(dāng)事人在缺乏監(jiān)督的情況下自控力不足，進(jìn)而導(dǎo)致效率低下。同事之間因?yàn)闊o法見面也會(huì)缺少交流溝通，影響團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的效率

依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)溝通，可能會(huì)使得人們忽略現(xiàn)實(shí)中陪伴的重要性，比如家人間一起吃飯、游玩或做些別的集體活動(dòng)，反而讓人們產(chǎn)生疏離感。

高分范文示例

The Internet technology has allowed people to carry out numerous tasks, including

shopping, without meeting others face to face. It is by and large a positive

development, despite the potential impact on social connections.

The u of the Internet for daily communication can enhance productivity and yield

economic benefits for individuals and companies alike. In this competitive world,

efficiency is a lifeline for people and companies, as the faster they complete work,

the bigger market they can cure. If they talk to clients and suppliers online, they

can exchange messages easily, confirm details of an order and conduct business

efficiently without travelling a long distance to meet each other. Similarly, by placing

an order on e-commerce websites and having products delivered to homes, working

people can cut the time for shopping and stay in the office if necessary to finish a

project before the deadline. High levels of productivity can put them ahead of

competitors and satisfy the needs of customers promptly, thereby winning more

contracts and earning more money.

Another benefit is that Internet-enabled communication can reduce the need for

transport and avoid pollution. The development of online communication tools, such

as video chatting, has empowered people to talk to each other in real-time without

experiencing any delay. They do not need to visit clients personally or shop in a

brick-and-mortar store to buy what they want. This means that a growing number of

people can work remotely or shop in the comfort of their homes, rather than driving

or using public transportation to offices or high streets. Emissions from vehicles

decline and the environmental problems arising from exhaust fumes can be

mitigated or prevented

On the other hand, if Internet-bad communication substitutes for face-to-face

meetings, community activities, family life and interpersonal relationships can be

under threat. There are some heavy urs of telecommunication technology who

become increasingly unsociable, as everything can be virtually carried out online,

ranging from discussions of work-related matters to grocery shopping. They may not

feel the need to sociali with colleagues or business partners or to communicate

with shop attendants of convenience stores around the corner about the latest news

of the neighbourhood. They even miss out the opportunity to enjoy a shopping trip

with family, talking about what to buy and choosing gifts for special occasions.

Technology may keep some people apart and foster a n of isolation among them.

In conclusion, I would perceive a drop in face-to-face communication as a positive

trend given the economic and environmental benefits, although, for some people,

they may feel disconnected from other members of community.

相關(guān)詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)

yield economic benefits 產(chǎn)生經(jīng)濟(jì)效益

a lifeline 生命線

e-commerce websites 電商平臺(tái)

put them ahead of competitors 領(lǐng)先競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手

Internet-bad communication 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)通訊

a bricks-and-mortar store 實(shí)體商店

heavy urs of telecommunication technology 電信技術(shù)的大量教育