高二英語8篇讀后續寫集錦

2024年2月20日發(作者：元宵節的燈謎)

高二英語8篇讀后續寫集錦

1．閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。Once upon a time, in a small village in Turkey, there lived a mother and her son was known by allas Bald Boy becau even though he was still quite young he had no hair on his head at Boy and his mother were very poor indeed and so each day Bald Boy would take up his basket andwent out into the woods in arch of day, as he was arching the forest floor for mushrooms, Bald Boy was sure that he could hear a younggirl he looked up he noticed a little squirrel(松鼠）sitting on the branch of the tree above squirrel was crying inconsolably(無法安慰的）and so Bald Boy took the little creature in comforted her and told her that everything was going to be at last the squirrel stopped crying,the two friends got to talking and the Bald Boy explained how helived with his mother and how they were very poor."I need to come into this forest each day in arch of food becau we have no money,"he told the was then that the little squirrel said,"You have been very kind to me today so I am going to help you inreturn."Then the little squirrel jumped out of Bald Boy's hands and said,"Follow me." The young boy followed thesquirrel through the forest for many hours until they reached a cliff edge(懸崖邊） that could e the greenvalley below."You must climb down this cliff,"said the squirrel."When you reach the bottom you will find the will ask you three questions and you must answer them all correctly to receive the prize."注意：1. 所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；2. 續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph 1:The squirrel climbed up onto Bald Boy's shoulder ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:"If you do not answer correctly,"she said in her cold voice,"______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】Paragraph 1:The squirrel climbed up onto Bald Boy's shoulder and whispered the answers to the three questions in hiar. Then she jumped down and ran back into the Boy made himlf a rope,then climbed down thecliff edge and made his way to where the squirrel had told him the Forest Queen she saw himapproaching, the Queen stopped Bald Boy and demanded that he answer three aph 2:"If you do not answer correctly,"she said in her cold voice,"then you will lo your head.""How manycherries are growing on this tree?""Where is the middle of the earth?""Which is the heavier of the twoapples?" Confidently,Bald Boy spoke out the answers the squirrel had already told Forest Queen couldnot deny that all three answers were correct and so she unwillingly handed Bald Boy a large bag of gold thatwas his prize. He thanked the squirrel in his heart and happily returned home to his mother with the gold.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達是讀后續寫。文章主要講述生活在一個小村莊里的禿頭男孩和他的母親相依為命，并且很貧窮。一天，這個禿頭男孩遇到一個哭的傷心的小松鼠并安慰它，小松鼠受到感動決定幫助男孩的故事。【詳解】續寫第一段開頭為：松鼠爬上禿頭男孩的肩膀，小聲說……后面應該寫小松鼠怎么幫助禿頭男孩去獲取獎勵，男孩怎樣到達懸崖底部見到森林女王的過程。續寫第二段開頭為：“如果你答錯了，”她用冰冷的聲音說，“那么……后面應該寫禿頭男孩回答上森林女王的問題，最終獲得獎勵，回到家中和他媽媽分享喜悅。

【點睛】文章主題部分選用的是一般過去時，續寫部分也用一般過去時，通篇時態把握準確；詞語運用恰當并且高級，顯示出較高的英語能力；文章中還使用大量的復合句，為文章增加色彩和高級感，如BaldBoy made himlf a rope, then climbed down the cliff edge and made his way to where the squirrel had toldhim the Forest Queen lived. The Forest Queen could not deny that all three answers were correct and so sheunwillingly handed Bald Boy a large bag of gold that was his prize. 這里的賓語從句和定語從句相結合使用，顯示高級的英語水平，精準掌握了從句使用的要領；續寫部分構思巧妙，銜接自然，思路清晰自然，表達完整，為一篇優秀的作品。

2．閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。Jenny was a pretty eight-year-old day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearlnecklace, by which she was totally defeated. How eagerly she wanted it! But when she saw the price, her heartsank a little. She gathered up her courage and asked her mother if she would buy it for her. Her mother said,“Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an awful lot of money. I can buy you the necklace, but when we gethome, we should make up a list of houwork that you can do to pay for the necklace.” Jenny agreedimmediately, feeling a burst of joy. So her mother bought the pearl necklace for her. Jenny worked on herhouwork determinedly and earnestly every day. Soon Jenny paid off the had a very loving daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story. One nightwhen he finished the story, he said, “Jenny, do you love me?” “Oh, yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the littlegirl said delightedly, with a broad smile on her face. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” Hearing that, Jennyfroze there, an anxious expression twisting her face. “Oh! Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Rosy, myfavorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. Okay?” “Oh no, darling, that’sokay.” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss, gently and calmly. “Good night, little one.”A week later, her father once again asked Jenny after her story, “Do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, youknow I love you.” the little girl murmured softly, trying to escape from her father’s eyes. “Well, then, give meyour pearls.” “Oh, Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Ribbons, my toy hor. Do you remember her? Sheis my favorite.” The little girl begged. “No, that’s okay,” her father said, smiling broadly and sweetly andbrushed her cheek again with a kiss. “God bless you, little one. Sweet dreams.”注意：

1. 所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；2. 續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph 1：Several days later, when Jenny’s father came in to read her story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him onthe bed.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2：Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】Paragraph 1：Several days later, when Jenny’s father came in to read her story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him onthe bed. When listening to the story, Jenny was totally abnt-minded, with her hands holding the necklacetightly and firmly. When the story came to an end, unexpectedly, Jenny offered her beloved necklace to herfather, with her fingers trembling automatically. No one knew what the necklace meant to her. She whispered toher father, softly and gently, “Daddy, you know I love you more than the necklace.” Then, the necklace slid intoher father’s hands aph 2：Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box. Much to Jenny’samazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which t her heart racing. Jenny frozethere, a thrilled expression twisting her face. Before Jenny was able to say something. her father brushed awarm kiss on her face and gathered her into his arms. Holding the genuine necklace in her hand, Jenny liftedher lip, tears beginning to blur her vision.

【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達考查讀后續寫。根據所給短文和段首句，續寫兩段，詞數要求為150詞左右。【詳解】讀后續寫主要以故事類文本為主，考生在閱讀時，不應該走馬觀花看情節，而應找出文章的六要素（who, when, where, what, how, why），然后將每個主要事件都用六要素串聯成一句話。這樣一來，冗長的故事就成了兩三句，文章的結構自然清晰明了。同時，考生還應該分析已給出的兩個開頭句包含的主要句子結構，這樣才能保證正確的寫作方向。為了寫出符合故事發展的“尾巴”，必須先分析原文的情節發展方向。除了采用上文提到過的六要素分析法，在審題時還應該著重分析三個點：起因、轉折、高潮。只有確定了故事的起因，考生才能合理推斷這個起因會導致的可能結果；只有確定了故事的轉折，考生才能合理地將故事發展下去。不過，在設計情節時，同樣要考慮六要素，將它們串聯成一句話，再將這句話添磚加瓦變成段落。在語言方面，注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切，合理使用高分詞匯、短語及句型；不要抄原文，情節合情合理；書寫美觀，保持卷面整潔。【點睛】范文內容完整，結構嚴謹，要點全面，語言規范，語篇連貫，詞數適當，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。作者在范文中使用了高級句子When listening to the story, Jenny was totally abnt-minded, withher hands holding the necklace tightly and firmly.使用了狀語從句的省略，和with復合結構；Holding theplastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box.使用了非謂語動詞做狀語；Much toJenny’s amazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which t her heart racing.使用了which引導的定語從句。這些為文章增色不少，而且全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉換自然，為文章增色添彩。

3．閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。 We moved on into the jungle-- a forest where large numbers of tall trees and plants grow very clotogether. Old Mali went in front and I followed clo behind him. We stopped for the night about an hour beforeit began to get Mali lit a fire. When it was bight he showed me how to make a bed with moss（青苔，苔蘚）.It was soft and comfortable.―Mali, how did you learn to make such a bed? I asked.

―I learned to make beds like that, Mali replied, ―by watching and listening to others. That is the realway to learn anything.―Will you let me watch you always? I asked Old Mali. ―I want to learn all the things you know aboutthe we had finished our supper, Old Mali got onto his bed and lay down. It was now completely dark. Inthe fire light, Old Mali emed to be fast asleep on his bed. I suddenly felt alone and day in the jungle, while we had been walking, I had heard nois of animals. Now they emed to bemuch nearer. The jungle was now a wall of blackness in the light of the fire.I felt frightened and suddenly my mouth went dry. I wanted to scream. I felt my mouth opening wide, readyto scream as loud as I did not scream. I saw Old Mali’s face in the firelight. This made me feel ashamed. I held my teethtightly together to stop mylf from screaming. I lay down and clod my soon as I clod my eyes. I heard a thousand nois. The whole jungle became alive with animalsmoving quietly and carefully all around me. Suddenly Old Mali took a deep breath and made a noi. I washearing so many imaginary noi and the real noi made by Old Mali gave me a terrible fright.I opened my eyes and jumped out of bed. I pulled my knife out and held it above my head.注意：1. 所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；2. 續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph 1:I was going to e if there was a wild animal beside the fire.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:Old Mali’s quiet calm voice made me feel better.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】Paragraph 1:I was going to e if there was a wild animal beside the fire. Through the burning fire, I believed I saw itssharp teeth and cruel red eyes. Its craws would inrt into my flash without mercy as soon as I came into itssight. I couldn’t help trembling and screaming loudly at the thought of it. Then a soft voice came from the dark,“Are you Okey?” It was Old Mali who was now lying on his side with his eyes wide aph 2:Old Mali’s quiet calm voice made me feel better. Adjusting breath quickly and obrving carefully, I foundthe “animal” was just the shade of trees. I laughed in relief and told Old Mali what had happened just known the whole story, Mali gave me an understanding smile and told me his former experiences injungle. With the stories, I got back to my bed and lay down. Exhausted, I clod my eyes, and knowing OldMali was watching, I soon fell fast asleep. That night was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memoryforever.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達考查讀后續寫。根據所給短文和段首句，續寫兩段，詞數要求為150詞左右。【詳解】通讀短文可知，作者跟隨著Old Mali進入了叢林。夜色降臨，吃完晚飯作者和 Old Mali各自休息，但作者一閉上眼睛就聽到各種動物的聲音，續寫由此展開。第一段以“我去看看火邊有沒有野獸”開始，所以接下來要敘述作者所誤認為的“野獸”以及當時作者的心理活動。這是Old Mali已經醒來，問作者“還好嗎”。第二段以“Old Mali平靜的聲音讓作者感覺好多了。”所以要接著寫Old Mali告訴了作者所謂的“野獸”就是樹的影子，并與作者講起了以前的叢林經歷，作者聽了這些故事，很快入睡，那晚是作者最難忘的經歷。【點睛】本篇范文層次清晰，要點全面，表達流暢，句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。文中使用一些極佳的詞語和句子為文章增色。使用高級句型有：…if there was a wild animal beside the fire和assoon as I came into its sight使用了狀語從句；It was Old Mali who was now lying on his side with his eyeswide open.使用了強調句型和with復合結構：Adjusting breath quickly and obrving carefully, I found the“animal” was just the shade of trees.和Having known the whole story,…使用了非謂語從句；…what had

happened just now使用了賓語從句；Exhausted, I clod my eyes, and knowing Old Mali was watching,…使用了形容詞作伴隨狀語和非謂語動詞結構；That night was so unforgettable that it would stay in mymemory forever.使用了so…that…引導的結果狀語從句。

4．閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。At Dana’s yard sale, Tim cho a baball from the toys spread on the card table and asked about the told him everything was a quarter except Nezumi, a cotton toy rat. It was grey with some cotton stickingout from the hole where an ear had been torn off.“Nezumi is extra special, so he is ten dollars. He needs a safe new home.” Dana sighed. Tim laughedsaying he didn’t have ten dollars. Dana laughed too and gave Nezumi to Tim as a free gift becau he was herfriend. When Tim whispered it was sort of old, Dana said old toys were the best. She then invited Tim to herbirthday party the next evening, adding that her parents were giving her a real rat for her birthday. Tim wasamazed and asked if it was a live rat.“Of cour.” Dana home, Tim’s mother showed him the gift she had bought for Dana. It was a knitting spool(針織線軸)shaped like a mushroom. Mom said Dana could knit a scarf for her doll. Tim sighed that Dana wasn’t a knittingkind of person but a rat kind of person. Mom laughed after knowing what had happened. Together they drove tothe pet store, where Tim arched and arched and lected a clear plastic ball, one in which the rat could runaround on the floor safe from cats and dogs. Tim thought of Nezumi’s ear and decided Dana’s new rat wouldneed this next day, Dana brought cupcakes to class. When she handed a cupcake to Tim, she asked if Timbrought Nezumi to school as Nezumi liked to ride in backpacks. Tim was at a loss becau Nezumi was athome on his bed. Then Dana asked what gift he was giving her. Tim replied it was a surpri. In silence they satfor a while before he heard Dana say her parents were giving her a new bike for her birthday instead of a liverat becau they thought rats would bite things.注意:1. 所續寫的短文詞數應為 150 左右;2. 續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph 1:At home that afternoon, Tim stared at the plastic rat ball.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:All of a sudden, he had an idea.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】Paragraph 1:At home that afternoon, Tim stared at the plastic rat ball. Wondering about the u of the clear plastic ball ifDana had no rat, he started walking up and down the room with a frown on his face. Mom was surprid andasked him what was happening. Tim told her Dana wasn’t getting a live rat from her parents but a bike. As theywere racking their brains (絞腦汁) to come up with an appropriate gift, Tim turn around and saw Nezumi on aph 2:All of a sudden, he had an idea. He lifted Nezumi and squeezing Nezumi into the plastic ball with greatcaution so that Nezumi would be safe from cats and dogs. Seeing this, Mom asked Tim whether he was givingDana an old cotton rat with one ear as a gift, Tim nodded with a smile saying she would definitely like g at Mom’s confud expression, Tim added that Dana was a Nezumi kind of person who thought oldtoys were the BEST.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達考查讀后續寫。根據所給短文和段首句，續寫兩段，詞數要求為150詞左右。【詳解】通過閱讀所給文章可知，Tim從Dana的庭院舊貨出售會得到了有一只耳朵被扯掉了的玩具老鼠Nezumi，Tim很喜歡。Dana的生日快到了，Tim去商店里為Dana喜歡的老鼠買了一個透明的塑料球，可

以讓它在里面跑，不會被貓和狗咬傷。第二天Tim聽到Dana說她的父母給她的生日禮物是一輛新自行車，而不是一只活老鼠，因為他們認為老鼠會咬東西。續寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：那天下午在家里，Tim盯著塑料老鼠球。所以后文應該是講述Tim得知Dana不會受到老鼠作為生日禮物后的心理活動，他覺得買的這個塑料老鼠球沒有用了，于是他皺著眉頭開始在房間里走來走去。媽媽很驚訝，問他發生了什么事。Tim告訴她Dana從她父母那里得到的不是一只活老鼠，而是一輛自行車。當他們絞盡腦汁想出合適的禮物時，Tim轉過身，看見Nezumi躺在床上；第二段開頭是：突然，他有了一個主意。本段應該寫Tim為Dana準備生日禮物的過程，Tim要送Dana一只長著一只耳朵的老鼠。最后還要注意所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右。按要求完成寫作任務。【點睛】本文描寫詳略得當，使用了高級詞匯和高級句子。如：walk up and down, not…but…, with greatcaution等高級詞匯；Wondering about the u of the clear plastic ball if Dana had no rat, he started walking upand down the room with a frown on his face.非謂語動詞的運用和if引導的條件狀語從句；Seeing this, Momasked Tim whether he was giving Dana an old cotton rat with one ear as a gift, Tim nodded with a smile sayingshe would definitely like it.運用了whether引導的賓語從句等高級句式。

5．閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。Freddie woke up to e it was snowing-again. The world outside was white. Snow covered the roads, thecars, the hous, and even the driveway Freddie had just shoveled the day before.“Ugh,” said Freddie. “No more snow!” He got out of bed and headed to the bathroom for his regularmorning shower. As he reached for the taps, his mother appeared in the doorway.“I’ve got news,” she said. “There’s been so much snow overnight that the roads are slippery and dangerous.I just heard on the radio that they canceled the school bus for the day.”Freddie groaned. “Then how am I suppod to get to school?”His mom grinned. “I guess you don’t. It’s a snow day!”Freddie’s eyes lit up. He’d never had a snow day off from school before. What would he do first?“I’m going back to bed!” Freddie headed back to his room and climbed under the covers. After a fewminutes, he realized that it was too late. He was already wide awake. He headed down to the kitchen and thensat at the table, watching his father fry the eggs over in the pan and his mother pour juice and coffee. It wasrelaxing, thought Freddie.

After breakfast his mother suggested he go out and build a snowman. Freddie wasn’t too sure. He didn’treally like the cold and the snow. He’d rather stay inside and play video games.“You can play afterward, but how about going outside for a little bit? It’s good to get some fresh air, andwho knows, you might even enjoy yourlf.” Freddie unwillingly put on the warm clothes and headed ng alone in the front yard, with the cold wind blowing, was not Freddie’s idea of a good g his mom meant what she said, the boy sighed, thinking the quicker he completed his snowman, thefaster he could go back inside to his video games. He t to work packing up some snow into a large s later, he saw one of his friends appearing from his hou up the street. Dion waddledout in hisbig snow trours and heavy overcoat. He waved to Freddie.“Hey there! I saw you out here and thought you might want company. Snow days are awesome!” Dionlaughed.注意：1. 所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；2. 續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph 1:Freddie was surprid but happy to e his classmate.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his hou.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】Paragraph 1:

Freddie was surprid but happy to e his classmate. “Yeah, sure. Help me make this snowman, wouldyou?” Dion nodded, and they got to work, building the snowman a solid ba and lifting a heavy snowball ontop of it. Dion found some stones for buttons, and Freddie stuck a couple of broken branches into the body tomake arms. Finally, the snowman was finishes! Then, they both had a good time. Suddenly, Dion said, “Hey, Iknow what we can do next!” He told Freddie his idea and Freddie aph 2:Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his hou. Seeing snow full of Freddie’s face and coat, hismother couldn’t help laughing. “Are you ready to come in?” she asked. “Not yet, mom.” Freddie said. Stillexcited, he asked his mother if he could go to the park with Dion and go sledding down the hill. KnowingFreddie would rather enjoy himlf outside, his mother agreed without hesitation. “Snow day are the best”Freddie yelled as he ran off to play with his friend.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達考查讀后續寫。根據所給短文和段首句，續寫兩段，詞數要求為150詞左右。【詳解】前文主要講的是主人公Freddie很懊惱下雪天，因為他可能又要為了保持道路暢通繼續出去鏟雪。不過，在得知學校由于連日積雪而停課時，Freddie激動不已，心想著終于可以宅在家里打游戲了。但是，媽媽堅持建議他出門去堆個雪人，呼吸下新鮮空氣。Freddie不情愿地來到院子，堆了個大雪球，同學Dion突然出現，興奮地想要成為Freddie的同伴，同時表示喜歡雪天帶來的快樂。在給的第一段開頭“Freddie was surprid but happy to e his classmate.”中“happy”一詞可以想象兩人一起成功地堆了雪人的而快樂場景；同時第二段開頭“Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into hishou.”中“excitedly”和“delighted”也呈現了Freddie的情感及態度變化。而“idea”一詞可以推測兩人在堆完雪人后有了進一步的想法，而這個想法也一定和戶外玩雪所帶來的快樂相關。【高分句型一】As Dion found some stones for buttons, Freddie stuck a couple of broken branches into the body to makearms. 當Dion找了一些石頭做紐扣時，Freddie就把幾根斷了的樹枝插進身體里做胳膊。運用時間狀語從句。【高分句型二】His mother agreed without hesitation becau she knew Freddie enjoyed himlf outside. 他的母親毫不猶豫地同意了，因為她知道Freddie在外面玩得很開心。運用原因狀語從句。

6．閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。Through our lives, we can gain a lot and lo so much. But being honest should always be with us, ashonesty is always regarded as a virtue. Every time I talk about the topic, something crowds in my mind as if ithad just happened.I was 16 when one morning, Dad told me I could drive him to Mijas and then take the car in a nearbygarage to get it rviced. At that time, I had just pasd the driving test, and I hardly had a chance to u the car,so I said yes without hesitation.I drove my father to Mijas, promising to pick him up again at 4 pm, then I went to anearby garage, and put the car in there. Since I had veral hours to spare, I decided to go to a movietheater near the garage to e the movie. However, I was so absorbed in the plot of the movie that I forgot thetime. When the last movie finished, I looked at my watch：6 pm. I was two hours late!I thought my father would be very angry if he knew what I was doing. And he would never let me driveagain. So I decided to make up an excu. Then, I drove to the appointed place, my father was sitting in acorner, waiting patiently. I first apologized for being late, then told him that I wanted to get there as soon aspossible, but that something was wrong with some of the main parts of the car.I would never forget the way he looked at me. “I'm very disappointed that you thought you had to lie to me,Jason.” My father looked at me again and said, “When you didn't show up on time, I called the gas station andasked if there was anything wrong They told me you never picked up the car. So, you e, I know there'snothing wrong with the car at all."注意：1. 所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；2. 續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph 1:A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was thereal reason why I was late.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:But father, it's exactly eighteen miles home from here , and it's dark. You can't walk back. " I begged.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【參考答案】Paragraph 1:A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was thereal reason why I was late. Dad listened carefully as a sadness pasd through him，“I'm angry, not with youbut with mylf. You e. I realize that I have failed as a father if after all the years you feel that you have tolie to me. I have failed becau I have brought up a son who cannot even tell the truth to his own father. I'mgoing to walk home now and think where I have gone wrong all the years”.Paragraph 2:But father, it's exactly eighteen miles home from here, and it's dark. You can't walk back. " I begged. Myprotests, my apologies and the rest of my words were uless. I had let my father down. and I was about to learnone of the most painful lessons of my life. Dad began walking along the dusty roads. I quickly jumped in thecar and followed behind. I apologized all the way,telling him how sorry I was, but he simply ignored me. For 18miles he kept walking. Seeing my father in so much pain was the most awful experience that I have r it was also the most successful lesson.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達考查讀后續寫。根據所給短文和段首句，續寫兩段，詞數要求為150詞左右。通過閱讀所給文章可知，作者駕車去接他的父親，但是他因為去看電影而耽誤了時間后，他謊稱去修車了，最后謊言被拆穿了，這使得父親非常生氣。【詳解】續寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：一股負疚感席卷了我，我不得不承認我去看電影了，這才是我遲到的真正原因……，所以應該寫父親對此的反應是什么以及父親的情感此時影視什么樣的。第二段

開頭是：可是，爸爸，那兒離這兒正好十八英里，而且天又黑。你不能走回去。我懇求。本段應該寫父親對我這么做的反應是什么以及我的心里活動是什么以及我從這件事情當中得到了什么經驗教訓。【點睛】本文描寫詳略得當，使用了高級詞匯和高級句子。如：protest，apologies，ignore等高級詞匯；非謂語動詞 I apologized all the way,telling him how sorry I was, but he simply ignored me，Dad listenedcarefully as a sadness pasd through him. as引導的狀語從句，I realize that I have failed as a father if after allthe years you feel that you have to lie to 引導的賓語從句。

7．閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。A gift of goldIt was the winter of 1937, just after Christmas. The Depression was still going on, but I was in good spirits.I was going to graduate from elementary school, but my mother still dresd me in shorts. Most of myclassmates had given up wearing shorts. For the graduation ceremony, all the boys were expected to wear whiteshirts and dark blue wool pants.I waited until a week before I told my mother. On a cold Monday afternoon I went home from school.“Mom,” I said, “”“Yes?” she answered.“They are going to give me the first-prize medal,” I working over the stove, she looked over her shoulder at me and smiled broadly. “That’s wonderful,Babe. Dad and I will be both there, and we’ll be the proudest.”She must have en by the look on my face that something was wrong. She turned her back and said, “So?”“So, I have to get long pants,” I said.“Babe, we don’t have money for new pants right now,” she said.“Okay,” I burst out.“Then I won’t go to graduation. Plus, I’m running away from home!”“If I were you, I wouldn’t pack my bags. We’ll solve the problem of pants somehow,” she following Saturday, when my mother said “Let’s go shopping”, I knew that she had solved theproblem. Then we left home. We took the trolley (有軌電車) and got off at Southern Boulevard, the bestshopping street. The clothing store was just a couple of blocks first we walked a short way down the Boulevard and stopped at a place I had never noticed before.

“Wait here,” she said. Then she entered a storefront that looked like a bank and opened the door with thehand with a gold wedding ring on her ring went out about ten minutes later with a pur in her left hand, and then we went to the pants store. Icho a pair of pants. After a patient bargain with the ller, my mother bought it at the price of three dollarsand fifty cents and handed it to me.注意：1. 所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；2. 續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph 1:I was holding the pants tightly under my arm when my mother went to pay the money.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:We took the trolley back home.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】Paragraph 1:I was holding the pants tightly under my arm when my mother went to pay the money. As soon as I turnedaround, I saw her take a sum of money out of her pure in her left hand. I didn’t know where my mom got allthis money from. Finally she handed this money for the pants to the ller, who immediately gave my motherthe fifty cents change. Mom smiled at me and said, “Let’s go back, honey.”Paragraph 2:We took the trolley back home. And the trolley was crowded with many people, so my mother and I werestanding together all the time. However, I even imagined walking up to the stage in my new pants to receive my

medal, and I couldn’t help laughing. When we got home, my mother took out the key and wanted to open thedoor. And at that moment, I noticed that the gold wedding ring on her ring finger my mother had always wornwas missing. Perhaps it was mother who sold it, and I felt sad, lost in thought.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達考查讀后續寫。根據所給短文和段首句，續寫兩段，詞數要求為150詞左右。【詳解】通過閱讀所給文章可知，1937年的冬天，作者即將參加小學畢業典禮，他告訴母親他需要一條褲子參加畢業典禮，但當時作者的家里買不起一條新褲子。作者的母親告訴作者會想辦法解決。有一天，作者和母親坐有軌電車來到了商業街，作者的母親先進入了一家看起來像銀行的店鋪，之后花了三美元五十美分給作者買了一條褲子。續寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：當我媽媽去付錢的時候，我把褲子緊緊地抱在懷里。所以應該寫我抱著新褲子，看著母親去付錢，當我看到母親拿出錢的時候，我心中疑惑：母親的錢是從哪來的。最后母親付完款喊我回家。第二段開頭是：我們乘坐電車回家了。本段應該寫我和母親在擁擠的電車上，但我卻想到我穿著新褲子去領獎，這讓我忍不住笑出聲來。當我們到家，母親去開門的時候，我注意到一直戴在母親手上的金戒指不見了。我猜到母親把它賣了，我感到很難過并陷入了沉思。【點睛】本文描寫詳略得當，情節生動，內容完整，符合題目要求。范文中使用的一些詞匯和句型值得我們學習。高級詞匯/短語，如：As soon as，immediately，be crowded with，couldn’t help doing，lost inthought等高級詞匯；非限制性定語從句Finally she handed this money for the pants to the ller, whoimmediately gave my mother the fifty cents change.強調句型Perhaps it was mother who sold it, and I felt sad,lost in thought.。

8．閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一個完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。It was a Saturday afternoon. The color of the sky was changing, first light gray, then dark gray, and finallydark and den. The wind was blowing heavily, and the trees were swaying in the strong wind. It began to raincats and dogs. Soon, the road was filled with puddles from the such a stormy afternoon, my mother took my five year old brother, Christopher, and me to a new big toystore she had read about in the newspaper. “So many toys，” the advertiment had shouted in full and flashy

color, “that we had to get a huge warehou to fit them all！”Christopher and I couldn't have been more excited. We ran across the parking lot, through the cold andbiting rain, as fast as our little legs could carry us. We left our mother outside to battle with the frustratingumbrella, which never worked when she wanted it to. “Christine! Take care of your young brother！” Mothershouted at the top of her voice.“Christine! I'm going to find the Lego ction (樂高積木區)! There's a new pirate ship I want, and I havefour dollars! Maybe I can buy it！” Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly. I only half heard him. I took aright turn and, to my wide eyed delight, found mylf in the midst of the Barbie (芭比) World.I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap ofthunder roared from the storm outside. I jumped at the noi, dropping the doll to the floor. The lights flickered(閃爍) once and died, covering everything in a blanket of blackness. Thunder continued to shake the sky andlightning illuminated the store for conds, casting frightening shadows on my mind.注意：1. 所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；2. 續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；Paragraph 1：“Oh no，” I thought, “Where's Christopher？”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2：“Christine, I'm here.”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】Paragraph 1：

“Oh no，” I thought, “Where's Christopher？” Scared and frozen on the spot, I felt the need to e, hug mybrother and make sure he was all right. My stomach twisted. I ran up and down the aisles in the dark, panicfilling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe. I knocked into displays of candies and tripped overtoys, while calling my brother's name like crazy. Anxious as I was, I could not find him. Tears of frustration andfear trickled down my face, but I continued to aph 2：“Christine, I'm here.” Excitement took my breath away — there in the Lego aisle I found Christopher. Hewas standing alone, perfectly still, next to the pirate ship t. I began to cry in relief, throwing my arms aroundhim and hugged him tightly. He hugged me back, saying, “I knew if I waited here, Christine, you would be ableto find me.” Then, I took his hand in mine and we went to look for our mother, who must be desperatelyarching the store for us.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達考查讀后續寫。根據所給短文和段首句，續寫兩段，詞數要求為150詞左右。【詳解】續寫短文需要先理清所給短文內容，掌握文章脈絡，可以先逐段總結大意：第一段：交代時間和天氣背景，周六下午，大雨滂沱。第二段：交代人物和事件，作者的母親帶她和五歲的弟弟去一家玩具店。第三段：興奮的姐弟倆先于母親之前沖進了商店，母親在后面大喊讓作者照顧好弟弟。第四段：弟弟跑去了樂高積木區，作者還沒來得及趕上去就被芭比娃娃給吸引住了。第五段：沉迷于芭比娃娃的作者被外面的閃電嚇到了，讓她想起可怕的事情。根據各段大意可知，這是一篇記敘文，已經將主干部分交代清楚，接下來應該按照故事的脈絡繼續發展下去，續寫的第一段開頭為：“噢不，”我想到，“Christopher哪兒去了？”也就是作者發現自己的弟弟不見了故事產生了懸念，所以該段的續寫可以考慮從作者心情焦急、四處尋找弟弟這一方面去描寫，其中可以參照原文的風格，加入一些細節描寫和心理描寫，制造懸念越緊張越好；而續寫的第二段開頭為：“Christine，我在這兒呢。”相當于是懸念后的一個反轉，作者的弟弟并沒有丟，所以該段的續寫可以考慮從作者心情上的轉變以及找到弟弟后兩人的行動上去展開。